I hoped you enjoyed my blog bye
what do you know about Editing and Revising?
I am a student at St Francis of Assisi Catholic School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Harry
ReplyDeleteGreat work there Harry. I really like your posters layout and the great colours. They are all good points. I always need to recheck my own work. Are you enjoying learning from home?
Steve
Hi Steve
ReplyDeleteThanks for the good feedback and yes I am enjoying learning from home
Thanks
From Harry