So most of the week I was working on one band man but I was sick on Tuesday so I fell a bit behind then we had to write about Hansel and Gretel you probably know what this story is if you don't it is about to kids who go out into the Forrest and find a house made out of candy and then a witch captures them and makes them her slaves but they escape I am going to show some of my writing now.
Hansel and Gretel had to leave there house and go pick some food from the Forrest then they stumbled upon I house made out of candy,lollies they both were very hungry so they went over to the house to eat it they could taste the goodness of this food this is one of the greatest moments of my life they both said at they could taste the sweetness of the sticky lollipops.
I hope you enjoyed this blog bye
what is your favorite fairy tale?
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