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Thursday, 25 June 2020

WritingT2 W11

Hi today I am going to tell you what I have done for writing this week. Firstly we go to our home bases for the rest of the week because of cross country but I was in a different group thing so I didn't have to go to my home base. We had to do three challenges in are writing I am showing telling you what they were

Complex sentence
Colon
alliteration

I am going to show you my writing now I have highlighted were I have used the challenges

Suddenly a small vehicle came out of thin air and smashed into a tree. Out of the plane/vehicle came a tiny creature that looked like a human it pushed over it’s plane/vehicle and it broke. Mara looked like she wanted to help this tiny creature but first she took out her phone out of her pocket and took a photo.it made had a Flashing,blinding,glimmering look to it. Lucas looked really scared because Mara way taller than Lucas herself.  

I hope you enjoyed this blog bye.
Tell me If you see any mistakes in my writing?
  
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