Writing T2 W9

This are goal for writing has been = use a range of written language features to engage the audience. Firstly we had to go to are workshop to find out what we were doing but first we had to watch a video called lost and found this video is about a dinosaur called Deano trying to save his friend a fox called Fifi from drowning in a bowl these creatures are only the size of teddy bears and are made out of wool. Then we had to write a chunk of the story to write some challenges I have high lighted were I have used them now I am going to show you mine this is mine, 

Chunk 8

Fifi had got out of the bowl of water and picked up the remains of Deano and was walking back to the tall table. Fifi started to climb up the big brown table this is hard, Fifi thought. She had just lost lots of energy from trying to get out of the bowl of water and the table was much taller than Fifi herself. Fifi kept on trying and trying and trying but couldn’t get up. After awhile Fifi took a break Fifi really wanted to get up for Deano Fifi tried some more and finally she got up she grabbed her sewing tools and started to make Deano back again she knew this would to take along time but it would be worth it and it was for deano as well and she knew when she had finished she would be happy.

this is what I have wrote for my first chunk then if you had finished that you had to write another chunk here is my other chunk.

Chunk 2   

After Deano had just finished waving to Fifi. Then Fifi threw a small rock in the bowl full of water it made a splashing,splashing,popping,noise then bamboo sticks full of water came crashing down on Fifi’s tell when Deono saw this he thought I have got to save Fifi Deano was shocked that Fifi had fell into this bowl full of water Fifi couldn't swim either Deano thought if he wanted to sacrifice himself to save Fifi he kept on thinking but Fifi was struggling then all of a sudden Fifi grabbed onto a bamboo stick that was going up she got on it then it came crashing,smashing,coming down into the water and Fifi Fell in again.

I hope you enjoyed bye

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