Writing T2 W10

HI today I am going to tell you what I have done for my writing this week. Firstly we had to go to our workshop and find out what were doing I wasn't at school on Monday so I didn't go to the workshop so on Tuesday I asked one of my friend's what we were doing we had to watch a video called piper and do a nine sentence story using three challenges we also had to pick one part of the story to write about. The challenges were.

• Complex sentence
• The sound of the waves
• Hyphen 

Those were the three challenges now I am going to show you my writing ( I have highlighted were I have used the challenges )  

Piper was fascinated looking at the tiny bug how it dug into the sand to prevent from the waves Pushing them back then all of a sudden a wave came out of no were.The wave was huge compared Piper,then Piper dug down into the ground and took the crashing wave Piper took a glimpse under the water she liked it under there then the wave went back and Piper started drying up again the wave that hit piper made whooshing noise Piper was amazed at this she wanted to do this more often and she thought if she did this more she would be able to catch here own food easily and she could stop having the fear of waves and when she did try find oyster’s to eat she could find the biggest ones.

This was my chunk after we had finished that we had to write anther chunk using the same challenges

I'm only showing you my best one I hope you enjoyed this blog bye

what's your favorite part of the story

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