Writing W7 T2

Hi I'm Harry and today I am going to show what I did for my writing learn create share. Firstly I watched a video with my whole group this video was called la Luna then we had to pick a point in the video and write nine sentences of the bit we had picked but we had some rules you had to have alliteration a sight and a question then if we had finished that we had to put it on a doc that are teacher had shared us then once we had finished that we had to pick anther point in the story and do the same thing here a mine.

Part 7 Incoming!

Luca and his Papa and Grandpa had just done some cleaning on the moon then Papa gave Luca a broom to clean the moon then grandpa came over and gave Luca a another broom this time the broom was different then started to argue about which one Luca should use.Then Luca put the brooms on Papa’s mustache and Grandpa’s beard they looked very similar to each other then there was a giant glowing light come directly toward Luca Papa and Grandpa they ran to a crater the crater was full of tiny stars then we felt the ground shake then Luca Papa and Grandpa all peeked out of the crater and saw a huge star they thought that's the biggest star I've seen in my life the star was tall than Grandpa and Papa combined the star was shiny,shimmering.  

this was my second one here is my first one.

Part 8 An idea

Then Luca looked at the star and lightly tapped the giant star. The star illuminated for a few seconds then he had a plan: he grabbed a hammer. Luca started to climb up the star Grandpa and Papa were wondering what he was doing ? Luca thought when Luca looked he thought to himself what a beautiful place then he climbed up the shimmering shining star then when he finally got up the star he point his hand on it he felt around to find the best spot to hit it on then he aimed with the hammer then he hit the star and it erupted into a bunch of little stars the ground was trembling  Luca was falling into a giant pile of starts Grandpa and Papa were really amazed that he had got the giant star out of the ground all by himself when they both couldn’t get it out together they were very happy with Luca.

I hoped you have enjoyed this blog bye.

                    

                                                            do you know what la Luna means